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Heartbroken by ~snoangelbabe:iconsnoangelbabe:

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My eyes fill with tears
As I watch your retreating back

I turn away
But I've no one to run to

Because that person
Is always you

I'm so heartbroken
I'm heartbroken over you

You make me cry
You make me weak

And I only wish
You could see me now

I want to run after you
But I know it'll do no good

So I won't try to chase you
And it's hard to stand back

I'm so heartbroken
I'm heartbroken over you

You make me cry
You make me weak

And I only wish
You could see me now

I'll hide my tears
And you'll never know

Oh, how my heart aches
And I breakdown

But, no
You'll never know

I'm so heartbroken
I'm heartbroken over you

You make me cry
You make me weak

And I only wish
You could see me now

But you'll never
See me like this

I only wish
You could see me now

Lying in a
Pool of tears

Don't you wish you could see me now?
Heartbroken over you
©2006-2009 ~snoangelbabe
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...You'll never see me crying...
..Heartbroken over you..

I'm sure every girl, maybe even a boy or 2, has been in this situation once before, if not more.

This is random. But, tell me what you think. I'm taking a collection of poems and publishing them sometime (hopefully soon). And I really like this one and was thinking of adding it to the collection. But I'd love to know what you think.
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~XFire5X:iconXFire5X: Oct 9, 2006, 9:02:36 PM
:( sad, but its really passionate

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~painkiller32:iconpainkiller32: Oct 9, 2006, 9:03:55 PM
ur darn right us guys get that! at least i do... have... am... love sucks, yet it is what drives us. you do such a wonderful job of capturing that, thats y ur one of my favorite poets. if u ever get published, let me know!

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!redheadviolinist:iconredheadviolinist: Oct 9, 2006, 10:56:29 PM
:( that is so beautiful, and so true...

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~snoangelbabe:iconsnoangelbabe: Oct 10, 2006, 6:21:04 AM
heh..thanks.

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~snoangelbabe:iconsnoangelbabe: Oct 10, 2006, 6:21:32 AM
:) thanks you! i will! :)

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~snoangelbabe:iconsnoangelbabe: Oct 10, 2006, 6:21:43 AM
thank you.

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~Kayarlynnean:iconKayarlynnean: Oct 10, 2006, 5:58:54 PM
oh yeah
only 13 and I've definately been there
but I'll be 14 on monday
~snoangelbabe:iconsnoangelbabe: Oct 10, 2006, 7:08:27 PM
yeah..i've been there even before i was 13. lol
w00t! happy early bday!

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!redheadviolinist:iconredheadviolinist: Oct 11, 2006, 1:52:09 AM
you're welcome!

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:rose: I am your Angel of Music :butterflytwo:
:heart: Music is the sound that feelings make...
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